Rhetoric (B)log consists of the efforts of one of BYU's English 150 classes to analyze the rhetoric of the world around them and to develop and contribute their own messages. Rhetoric--arguments, messages, and assumptions that change the way we think and feel--is all around us, permeating media, our interactions with others, public occasions, and any act of communication.
Tuesday, March 31, 2009
Transitions
Honestly my paper for the most part was just off on the flow and transitions between paragraphs. I knew from the beginning I was going to have issues with transitions between paragraphs because when it came down to moving to the next paragraph I couldn’t really figure out what I was going to say. So I just started the new paragraph even though I knew it didn’t flow well. I’ve been making the simple corrections on ma paper and figure that tomorrow, if all is well, I can receive help and work on my transitions with my Professor. My goal tomorrow is to start my transitions and topic sentences to connect my paper together as a whole.
My sources don't always have to do with the same subject either so transitions and topic sentences are key. Assuming you can get this done, your paper should come out pretty well.
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