Rhetoric (B)log consists of the efforts of one of BYU's English 150 classes to analyze the rhetoric of the world around them and to develop and contribute their own messages. Rhetoric--arguments, messages, and assumptions that change the way we think and feel--is all around us, permeating media, our interactions with others, public occasions, and any act of communication.
Your first paragraph is a point first paragraph. It talks about how sweatshops have started to globalize and then you back this up with the rest of your paragraph by giving quotes from the dictionary and such. I believe that it does give high expectations for the paragraph. It gives insight as to what it is you are going to explain throughout the continuation of your paper.
Again I think your second paragraph is a point first paragraph. You state that one of the largest dillemas is low wages and then explain and give detailed reasons why this is so. I believe that it creates a great expectation for the rest of the paragraph because it states right there what you are going to talk about and why it is important.
And again i believe that your third paragraph is also a point first paragraph because you explain exactly what you are going to talk about in the first sentence. I find that this is very helpful to the entire paragraph and paper as a whole because it explains what the paragraph is going to say and why it is important. It also gives organziation to your paper.
One of the largest dilemmas surrounding sweatshops. Sweatshop moralists. it. those who work at sweatshops. Economists Benjamin Powell and David Skarbek. One result. Apparel workers in the Dominican Republic. The concern. sweatshop workers.
I think you did a good job of introducing everything prior to the point of the sentence. Nothing appeared to just be new out of nowhere.
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Your first paragraph is a point first paragraph. It talks about how sweatshops have started to globalize and then you back this up with the rest of your paragraph by giving quotes from the dictionary and such. I believe that it does give high expectations for the paragraph. It gives insight as to what it is you are going to explain throughout the continuation of your paper.
Again I think your second paragraph is a point first paragraph. You state that one of the largest dillemas is low wages and then explain and give detailed reasons why this is so. I believe that it creates a great expectation for the rest of the paragraph because it states right there what you are going to talk about and why it is important.
And again i believe that your third paragraph is also a point first paragraph because you explain exactly what you are going to talk about in the first sentence. I find that this is very helpful to the entire paragraph and paper as a whole because it explains what the paragraph is going to say and why it is important. It also gives organziation to your paper.
One of the largest dilemmas surrounding sweatshops.
Sweatshop moralists.
it.
those who work at sweatshops.
Economists Benjamin Powell and David Skarbek.
One result.
Apparel workers in the Dominican Republic.
The concern.
sweatshop workers.
I think you did a good job of introducing everything prior to the point of the sentence. Nothing appeared to just be new out of nowhere.
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