Total number of words __465__ __1,084__
Total number of sentences __24__ __48__
Longest sentence (in # of words) __41__ __54__
Shortest sentence (in # of words) __2__ __10__
Average sentence length __19__ __23__
Number of sentences w/ more than
10 words over the average length __4__ __5__
Percentage of sentences w/ more
than 10 words over the average __16__ __10__
Number of sentences w/ more than
5 words below the average __4__ __13__
Percentage of sentences w/ more than
5 words below the average __16__ __27__
Paragraph Length
Longest Paragraph (in # of sentences) __6__ __11__
Shortest Paragraph (in # of sentences) __2__ __5__
Average Paragraph (in # of sentences) __4__ __8__
From this exercise I learned that although the expert had less words the percentages were really close. I think that for the most part we had the same kind of structure, except the professional was more concise with his concepts, however I don't think that that is possible for my paper. I really need to sit down and see if I can be more concise at any point and work on that.
3 comments:
That is great that you have basically the same structure as the professional! I also need to be more concise in my writing.
That's great that the percentages are really close. I also need to work on being concise and getting my idea conveyed in fewer sentences.
Yea getting the point across in the same structure as a professional is exceptional. My paper was definitly not the same in percentages.
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