Wednesday, January 28, 2009

Our Signature: A Code of Honor

Our Signature: A Code of Honor

Brigham Young University is a wonderful campus where the Spirit of God can be felt. On the surface, the easy going and pleasant atmosphere is inviting to students from all around the world. There is no doubt that BYU is a cut above the rest when it comes to campus cleanliness, not only physically, but spiritually as well.
On the average, BYU students are wholesome individuals who desire to gain a fine education and fully intend to respect the Honor Code. However, on occasion, these well-intentioned people may find themselves naïve to the specific guidelines laid down in the Honor Code, thereby breaking it unknowingly. Personally, I know I didn’t read all of the Honor Code before signing it and I know I can’t recite all of its statutes. These instances are innocent mistakes that are easily handled and corrected.
However, there is a difference between unknowingly breaking the Honor Code and being indifferent to its values. As students at BYU, we need to be mindful that if we know the rules, we need to follow them. Additionally, we can’t claim innocence if we break the Honor Code “unknowingly” but put no previous effort into finding for ourselves what the document states. The Honor Code as we know it today was adopted in 1940 and was designed to deal with cases of academic dishonesty and cheating. President Ernest L. Wilkinson, in 1957, increased the scope of the Honor Code to encompass many of the values we honor today. Morality, dress and grooming standards, drugs, and alcohol are all included within its text, as are many other standards that are in line with the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints.
As students, we were required to sign this document upon applying to the university. Many of the “standard” components of the Honor Code are well known and easy to follow. However, there are some discrete parts of the rules which may not be as obvious to all students. For example, do we all know that the Honor Code “standards expressed above apply to students at all times whether on or off campus”? After Christmas break one of my friends said that he had obeyed all of the aspects of the Honor Code while at home. I thought this was a tad bit extreme but in the end he was correct in his actions. No matter where we are or what we are doing, the Honor Code that we have signed to attend Brigham Young University still applies.
One facet of the Honor Code, which most certainly applies to LDS and non-LDS students alike, states that students will “participate regularly in church services”. In order to carry out this aspect of the Honor Code, students must “fulfill their duty in The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints, attend Church meetings, and abide by the rules and standards of the Church on and off campus”.
One way fulfill our duties in the church is to magnify our callings. In my ward, I have yet to see our Sunday School President or our Activities Committee Chair at the weekly ward counsel. It is no surprise then that these are the two committees within the ward that are struggling.
Another sad reality in our ward is the dwindling attendance, especially to Relief Society and Elder’s Quorum. Our parents are no longer by our sides to continually nag us to wake up and go to church. Yeah, nine o’clock church is tough and we’re all tired, but I guess we need to ask ourselves how much we truly value taking the sacrament, renewing our covenants, and feeling the influence of the Holy Ghost.
If being too tired or too exhausted are our “reasons” (cough, cough, I mean “excuses”) for not attending out meetings, we need to step back and examine our choices. Could we possibly get in bed earlier on Friday and Saturday nights? I know I can. I know the social atmosphere at BYU is tough to ignore, but if we choose to embrace it, we have no reason to stop fulfilling our callings and going to church. After placing our signature on the Honor Code, we have a duty and obligation to fulfill all of its requirements. Refusing to do so will jeopardize our current status and future goals with Brigham Young University.
As a human being and as a student at this wonderful university, I understand if some of the rules are not totally understood by every single student. However, rebellion and disregard for our school’s policies is unacceptable and takes away from the magnificent atmosphere on campus.
A few months back, I went with some friends of mine to the Power Tumble Gym. We were with another group of kids who were also BYU students. One individual’s hairstyle clearly did not meet the dress and grooming requirements of the Honor Code. I overheard this individual squabbling that his or her parents had forced him or her to attend BYU and to demonstrate his or her apathy for the situation, decided to “screw” the Honor Code. I couldn’t believe the attitude of this individual towards a document he or she had signed, symbolizing his or her agreement to live by its standards. Attitudes such as this are inexcusable. If you sign it, you live by it. That is just how it goes.
No matter the reason behind our defiance and disobedience, nobody has the right to regard the Honor Code as being invaluable or not worth living. The Honor Code is one of, if not the, largest factor that sets BYU apart from other universities. As such, it is mandatory that all students uphold its standards and guidelines.
America was founded upon the ideals of the pursuit of happiness, equality, and freedom. Time has molded our society into a very different shape today than what it was in 1776. Some changes have been for the better and some for the worse. Back then, your signature meant something.
The signers of the Declaration of Independence did not sign the document planning on taking it back if the British ever laid hands on them. John Hancock did not sign the Declaration of Independence in such a bold fashion because it was something worth living for, but because it was something worth dying for.
The signatures of those men held their honor and integrity, something not even the royal crown of England could take away. Except when questioned under law, our personal integrity no longer seems to be attached with the name we sign, as seen by those who sign the honor code, but give no regard to obeying all of its components. We do not have the right to pick and choose which aspects of the honor code apply to us. We all signed the document. We will obey all of its statutes. That is it. No more, no less. It's final. We gave our honor to live up to its standards and nothing less will be accepted. Our signature is our word, our promise, our honor.

5 comments:

Aaron said...

1.The thesis or argument of the O.E. is the manner in which the Honor Code should be followed. the influence is targeted at the students of Brigham Young to follow the Code more strictly and to educate themselves on the Honor Code befroe attending BYU. I think a convinving argument for the reader is to maybe relate more to why the rules are set and why it's so importent to follow them. Not shaving for a day in the eternal perspective of things isn't a big deal and students shouldn't be punished to that extent. To target why it is a larger deal is a much needed argument worth answering.I love the fact that the honesty of signing the Honor Code without reading it. I agree it needs to be taken more seriously.

Cara said...

Three things that work:
1. Strong conclusion: good job advocating students to follow what they sign and agree to by relating it to the signing of the Declaration of Independence
2. Making it personal: you kept the reader's interest by using examples and stories from your own life
3. Voice: your voice shows in your writing which is great. It is not just another generic essay in a boring tone, but something worth reading and interesting

Three things that can be improved:
1. Making every sentence count: when editing, read through every sentence and ask yourself if it serves a purpose and if it helps your arguement. In paragraph six you talk about how students should wake up early to go to Church. Just make sure you tie the importance of this paragraph to your thesis.
2. Try not to be so harsh to the Honor Code breakers: in paragraph five you talk about how the Sunday School President and Activites Committee Chair do not attend morning meetings and blame them for why those groups are struggling. When reading that I got distracted from your main thesis and started feeling sympathy for them and wondered why exactly they were struggling and if it was really their fault.
3. Proofread by reading outloud: By reading our work outloud you can pick up on sentences that are less significant and improve word choice as well as find grammitcal errors. From my reading I didn't notice too many errors, but it still wouldn't hurt.

Scott said...

Thanks for the comments. These will really be helpful when I'm working on my final. I think sometimes I just re-word the same sentence and throw it in. I will look at my essay more carefully and remove any unnecessary sentences. Thank you for you insight on the church thing. I had never even thought about how the reader might react to what I had written. Thanks.

Scott said...

From my meeting with Professor Cowley, I needed to approach my paper as being one of the students and not appearing as a self-righteous kid who does everything perfect. In my original draft I came on too strong in my first paragraph. In my current essay, I ease into the topic and then save the heavy hitter for the conclusion. In my original essay, I stated that I became frustrated when others don't obey the honor code they've signed. To be honest, anyone reading my essay probably won't care a whole lot about my personal opinion and what frustrates me. I removed these parts from my essay and tried to replace it with how our actions can affect the greater community. For my final draft I am going to take Cara's advice and look into the situation where I call out people in my ward. I never looked at it the way she did and I will try to clarify why I feel the way I do.

jrobledo said...

I think your second to last paragraph that opened with,"No matter the reason behind our defiance..." is a great asset to your argument. It set the reader to thinking about what it is that they need to think about when considering to break the honor code.