Feedback on O.E.

I shared my paper will the girls in my hall and a group of guys in my ward. It was difficult for me to share my writing and except criticism because I'm just used to writing something and turning it in to a teacher. However, I learned a lot from the feedback I received. My topic of sororities and fraternities was very controversial between the students I shared it with. They pointed out the strong points I had made but also pointed out a ton of negative aspects. For me I saw that although I had some strong arguments I should have focused on backing up counter arguments more. It helped me see the my strengths and weaknesses in my article and I also saw that the stereotype fraternity and sorority is one engraved in the minds of others that is not likely to be changed.