Thursday, February 19, 2009

Water Wars

“Bottled water gives the pre-packaged impression of safety.” However, Joshua Ortega strives to open the eyes of his blind audience to the dangers of bottled water and the future problems the water industry has in store. Ortega, writer of The Seattle Times, uses literary devices and rhetorical tools in his article, “Water Wars: Bottling Up the World’s Supply of H2O,” to persuade his readers to boycott bottled water and drink tap water. Joshua Ortega uses strong diction, allusions, and other tools to build his credibility and appeal to both pathos and logos while convincing his readers to be aware of the contaminated bottled water and the privatization of water industries, which is the “most important issue we will face in our lifetime.”

3 comments:

Spencer Funk said...

I thought it was effective how you opened your paper with a quote. It grabs the reader and makes them want to read more. Good job!

Anu O'Neill said...

I have to disagree with Spencer, I think it is okay to end with a quote but a little too much to start with one. I believe that it takes away from your personal opinion, and causes the reader to focus on the quote and not what you are trying to say. Everything else sounds great though!

Anonymous said...

I started my essay with a quote. I find, especially in an analysis of anothers writing to open with the word you are going to analyze. Generally you should begin with your own words but in this case I think it works.