Rhetoric (B)log consists of the efforts of one of BYU's English 150 classes to analyze the rhetoric of the world around them and to develop and contribute their own messages. Rhetoric--arguments, messages, and assumptions that change the way we think and feel--is all around us, permeating media, our interactions with others, public occasions, and any act of communication.
I found it interesting that we both have the same topic, but that we take a completely different view on it. However, in the end we both seem to believe that compromise is the best solution. I thought your outline flowed logically from point to point. The only thing that I could think of to help the structure of your paper would maybe be the working environment section before the wages section. This might help to ease your reader into the economic perspective by first establishing the working conditions.
Thanks for your suggestions. Feel free to use any of my information for your essay. I need to develop my main points a little bit better like you have done on your outline. I will re-organize that and get some more "subpoints" into my outline so that I have a better direction of where I'm going with my paper.
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I found it interesting that we both have the same topic, but that we take a completely different view on it. However, in the end we both seem to believe that compromise is the best solution. I thought your outline flowed logically from point to point. The only thing that I could think of to help the structure of your paper would maybe be the working environment section before the wages section. This might help to ease your reader into the economic perspective by first establishing the working conditions.
Thanks for your suggestions. Feel free to use any of my information for your essay. I need to develop my main points a little bit better like you have done on your outline. I will re-organize that and get some more "subpoints" into my outline so that I have a better direction of where I'm going with my paper.
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