Professional Student
Total number of words ___542________ ____1,156____
Total number of sentences ____31_______ ___55_____
Longest sentence (in # of words) ____46_______ ___36_____
Shortest sentence (in # of words) _____3______ ____15____
Average sentence length ____23_______ ____20____
Number of sentences w/ more than
10 words over the average length ___25________ ___21_____
Percentage of sentences w/ more
than 10 words over the average ____80%_______ ___40%_____
Number of sentences w/ more than
5 words below the average ____10%_______ ___10_____
Percentage of sentences w/ more than
5 words below the average _____10%______ ___20%_____
Paragraph Length
Longest Paragraph (in # of sentences) _____5______ ____12____
Shortest Paragraph (in # of sentences) _____3______ ___5_____
Average Paragraph (in # of sentences) ______4_____ ____8____
I noticed that the professional liked to write very long sentences. He rarely used short sentences. When he, it was to get his point across. I also noticed that his tone was very informative and not very personable. Mine, on the other hand, was more personal and didn't seem like a robot was writing. But over all i think that his outline and progress was more fluid than mine was. I sometimes get off topic but it is my rough draft. Finally I think that I use a lot more words to get my point across.
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Yes, I noticed that the professional wrote very long sentences as well. My editorial also was way over the amount of words the professional used.
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