I feel like my opinion editorial was very affective in expressing the parking problems at BYU. The BYU parking office had a great resource for the facts in my paper. I feel like I am able to research well for any paper and find facts that prove without doubt that there is a problem. My facts sometimes stand alone without much explanation.
I have found that my writing style is quite formal. It is sometimes hard to read because my ideas are separated and do not flow together. I need to include better transitions between paragraphs. I have good, well thought out ideas. Tying them all together would make my ideas mean that much more.
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I also sometimes have a really hard time ahve going transitions between paragraphs. I think I can change a lot of that if I have better prewriting.
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