Revision

With the new direction of my paper, most of the revisions are to the structure and reworking what is already in my paper to demonstrate this new position. This new angle about narratives and the cultural influences flows much more naturally than trying to debate about the globalization of film. In class today, I plan on re reading through my hard copy and writing in revisions and incorporating my new sources into the argument to make the paper more cohesive and clear about this new argument.